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Creating a songtext or lyric poetry!

Jens K

User since 2008
Posts: 16

11 Nov. 2008

Hi friends of Gymlish all over the world! Let's build a work of art together. I'd like You to add only one line, with or without rhyming, so we will get real lyrics. It could be big fun. Maybe, I'll create a song of this, watch out. Now here is the first line:

Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen

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AhQ ['a: kiu]
User since 2006
Posts: 2715
12 Nov. 2008

Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen
Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen
Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen
Jens K
User since 2008
Posts: 16
20 Nov. 2008

Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen.
Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen!
Come on, push the button, enjoy the release
Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen. Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen! Come on, push the button, enjoy the release
mikaella
User since 2008
Posts: 1
21 Nov. 2008

hold on, be strong, all we need it's relief
hold on, be strong, all we need it's relief
AhQ ['a: kiu]
User since 2006
Posts: 2715
21 Nov. 2008

Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen.
Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen!
Come on, push the button, enjoy the release.
Hold on, be strong, all we need it's relief.
Let loose, lust for climax, start with a strip-tease.
Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen. Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen! Come on, push the button, enjoy the release. Hold on, be strong, all we need it's relief. Let loose, lust for climax, start with a strip-tease.
AhQ ['a: kiu]
User since 2006
Posts: 2715
21 Nov. 2008

Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen.
Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen!
Come on, push the button, enjoy the release.
Hold on, be strong, all we need it's relief.
Let loose, lust for climax, start with a strip-tease.
Mat skin, wet lips, make do with disbelief
Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen. Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen! Come on, push the button, enjoy the release. Hold on, be strong, all we need it's relief. Let loose, lust for climax, start with a strip-tease. Mat skin, wet lips, make do with disbelief
Jens K
User since 2008
Posts: 16
4 Dec. 2008

Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen.
Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen!
Come on, push the button, enjoy the release.
Hold on, be strong, all we need is relief.
Let loose, lust for climax, start with a strip-tease.
Mat skin, wet lips, make do with disbelief.
But this is just my display, see what happens outside,
Desire, it's me, just staring at the screen. Beloved, would you, get me rid of my spleen! Come on, push the button, enjoy the release. Hold on, be strong, all we need is relief. Let loose, lust for climax, start with a strip-tease. Mat skin, wet lips, make do with disbelief. But this is just my display, see what happens outside,
AhQ ['a: kiu]
User since 2006
Posts: 2715
17 Dec. 2008

Outside, a sky is overcast.
Radioâ€™s blaring out at full blast.
A farmer is toiling on a soil.
Housewives put some water to boil.
A schoolboy gets chid by a teacher.
A suckerâ€™s soothed by a preacher.
So-and-so Joe Six-Pack makes do with a dull day.
Outside, a sky is overcast. Radioâ€™s blaring out at full blast. A farmer is toiling on a soil. Housewives put some water to boil. A schoolboy gets chid by a teacher. A suckerâ€™s soothed by a preacher. So-and-so Joe Six-Pack makes do with a dull day.
bumbrlik
User since 2008
Posts: 14
22 Dec. 2008

Let's turn the page and look for a better day
We all need some boost on our way
Let behind spleen and stress and the routine play
Kiss them goodbye, cheer up and enjoy your day.
Let's turn the page and look for a better day We all need some boost on our way Let behind spleen and stress and the routine play Kiss them goodbye, cheer up and enjoy your day.
Karoline1
User since 2008
Posts: 1
11 Jan. 2009

Forget all of it and all of them
enjoy your day with a word
enjoy your day in the sun
the birds you heard
as long as you are gone.
Forget all of it and all of them enjoy your day with a word enjoy your day in the sun the birds you heard as long as you are gone.

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